very nice but now i want more first of all that situation would be horrible because i hate the ocean but if you publish this i will be the first in line to buy it
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Suh-weet.
If I publish it, and if only one person buys it, I'd be happy :P
I agree with the top two comments, you are a gifted writer :P
Hopefully the skill will come in handy some day.
thanks for the awesome review.
^.^
wow dude. first "There was this girl" now this.
never really gotten around to posting in that thread. i just finished it (late i know) but that was so inspiring and,.......indescribable.
i literally felt for you while i was reading it. ive been in a similar situation with a girl during high school, and now that im in college, i really wish i had the balls to do what u did. mad props. send ur stories out, see if u can get published. its damn good.
Heh.
thanks heaps.
woah :O this is great, rion. i read there was this girl and... just...this too...
Masterpieces.
Thanks.
though it didn't feel like a master piece to me (there was this girl...)
:P
Best... story... ever... Seriously, the "There was this girl" was so touching and sad, I nearly cried a little... Keep writing! This novel is going to be famous...
woah, thanks.
You should've read the redone one :P
oh wellz
Irrelephant
holy crap that's beautiful, man
you're really descriptive, and you use a lot of amazing words
i read your thread, "There was this girl" and it was awesome
you should be an author, you would make millions
RionHunter
One can only dream :P