Wait, does this mean Alan is back? :|
oh, so you CAN count to three.
*Laughs all the way to the (tankman 3-less) bank*
I think I like your birthdays more than I like mine.
The animation looks amazing, and I'm super keen, but the dialogue recording quality seems a little.. lackluster in comparison.
Well animated, great story, but the sound effects were just too jarring. They're out of place and too comical. The music is perfect, the environmental sounds are great, but the walking and the sword swiping and the heads moving are just wrong.
I freaking love mameshiba.
You did a good job with this.
Story of my life.
Great use of expressions. I admittedly enjoyed the way the girl cried...
just the way she sobbed.
I'm not into making girls cry though.
Don't think that I am.
And very relevant.
This is practically my biography.
It was okay
I've always thought they're talking about 'mr sheen' in that song.
anywayz, one technique that I think will help you is instead of drawing an image in frame by frame, like you have, try drawing the whole thing, and then erasing the lines backwards, frame by frame. It'll give it cleaner lines, instead of those chunky ones that you've got in the first half of this piece.
Hope that helps.
You have amazing, AMAZING style, but the sounds are too comic for it.
it's out of place.
if you just had a nice droney kinda noise, this could've been one of the greatest pieces of the year, no joke.
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